tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7679656741678033917.post1067666167701260049..comments2023-05-08T06:37:12.695-05:00Comments on through the wind winding: Bad Vibes & Things Discarded: 55 Worded WorksSweeper of Dreamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00078459443293328745noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7679656741678033917.post-36261212651692478462014-12-09T22:35:33.517-06:002014-12-09T22:35:33.517-06:00nice...they give just enough of the story to get u...nice...they give just enough of the story to get us intrigued...i used to write 55s every week...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7679656741678033917.post-15502865464705679592014-12-07T17:11:49.984-06:002014-12-07T17:11:49.984-06:00Your story-telling voice is strong...for me, I enj...Your story-telling voice is strong...for me, I enjoy seeing where those middle two pieces went...same beginning different paths...interesting!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7679656741678033917.post-7281390939597335072014-12-07T13:44:51.391-06:002014-12-07T13:44:51.391-06:00whoosh, these are all so strong. more! more!whoosh, these are all so strong. more! more!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7679656741678033917.post-42517247436040920452014-12-07T07:40:18.679-06:002014-12-07T07:40:18.679-06:00Yikes- I watch my grandson play his games and thin...Yikes- I watch my grandson play his games and think he'd shriek if the scene in your first poem happened to him.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7679656741678033917.post-24772261247902785262014-12-07T01:17:53.991-06:002014-12-07T01:17:53.991-06:00Love the open-ended possibilities of the three fla...Love the open-ended possibilities of the three flashes especially number 3... And yes the poem seem to add completeness to the mystery of what could have happened.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7679656741678033917.post-15862944269123159782014-12-06T23:30:35.437-06:002014-12-06T23:30:35.437-06:00" In your shriek, the virtual becomes real.&q..." In your shriek, the virtual becomes real."<br /><br />Ouch. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7679656741678033917.post-50745664978405015792014-12-06T23:24:19.382-06:002014-12-06T23:24:19.382-06:00I'm quite impressed! Vivid imagination you ha...I'm quite impressed! Vivid imagination you have and a talented pen.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7679656741678033917.post-79806265777125182832014-12-06T21:29:30.165-06:002014-12-06T21:29:30.165-06:00Great job on these. Perfect shorts.
I especially l...Great job on these. Perfect shorts.<br />I especially like the second one, so many possibilities, and the last stanza of "Resonance" seems to bring it all full circle. Thank you for these interesting 55's.<br /><br />Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7679656741678033917.post-87092735873716085592014-12-06T20:21:59.425-06:002014-12-06T20:21:59.425-06:00These are really outstanding!These are really outstanding!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com